2011년 1월 19일 수요일

Haiku



Peaceful red sunset
Glazing the ancient woodlands
Waiting for darkness 

Brave blue H2O
Marching forward without stop
Crash! into the shore

Flowers of pure white
Delicate innocent dream
winter wonderland!

2010년 11월 10일 수요일

What do you think

1. God says we all have talents. Define Talent.

- I think what talents means is that what your good at. and Talents are gift that God gave us as Mrs.Gunther says we get a card and we have that talent. We have different cards. Such as gift for good voice ,good at playing instements and other many things. Talent is a gift from God that helps us in our life.

2010년 10월 4일 월요일

Three pigs and a wolf

The situation is the story of three pigs and the wolf who tries to eat them. And wolf came to the court for a crime of trying to eat three pigs.

Wolf: Dear Judge, I stand before you today, I just wanted to teach pigs a lesson about how important the firm foundation is. If you don’t have strong basic, you won’t have strong output or you put yourself in danger. In other words, if each pig built a house with bricks, all three pigs were safe in the first place. And to be honest with you if I wanted those pigs I could have hunted them while they were running away from me because I am way faster than them. Those pigs are the ones who should be in crime because I have red butt due to three pigs and I had to spend over 200,000won in the hospital for the treatment of injury.

My conclusion is that wolf educated pigs about importance of having strong basics in life. If that doesn’t work out he will start talking about what pigs did to wolf because actually wolf didn’t hurt the pigs, three pigs hurt the wolf.

2010년 8월 24일 화요일

Scream short story.

        There was a boy name John. He lived in down town of Teajon.
One day his mom told him to buy some groceries on the list at the store. He got 15000won from his mom and mom told him to come back before 6pm because that's the time before his dad comes.  He was walking on the bridge to go to Teajon market to buy groceries. "Hey John!"someone called John from behind.
"Brad? What are you doing here?"said John  "I am way to go to PC bang! do you want to come with me?"said Brad "No i got to go buy some groceries for dinner sorry man" said John. "Come on man! we're not in kindgarten, just one hour!"said Brad."Fine just one hour..it should be fine" John was planning to do one hour of PC bang and go buy groceries, because it was only 4:30pm.

    "Oh my goodness! what is this new game called? its so fun!"john shouted out, Bred replied " its call sudden attack its pretty fun game right?!" John got into game so much that he just realized the time was passing 5:45. "Oh, no! I got to go Bred later!" John ran out so fast that Bred couldn't say bye to him. As John was running he was thinking 'it takes about 5miunte to get to bridge and i can buy groceries in abour 6muinite so i won't be late!' "I am genius!"he told himself.   When John just steped in to bridge. By the time John get on to bridge was5:53. He was checking his poket to make sure his money and list are there. "Of course there is money !"and he checked the other poket and his face turnd blue. He lost his list!!!!!!!!!!

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!" He Screamed and the clock was ticking toward 6:00pm (and he never went to PC bang never again=p)

2010년 8월 17일 화요일

Qestions :What characteristics describe “good” writing?


        Good writing needs to have clear topic , good understanding of word use and good connecing words.

-Why do we have to have "Clear topic" to describe good writing?

      First of all if you don' have clear topics for your writing, it is already bad writing.
beacuse most of the time we are writing for give information to other people. However if you dont have clear topics  to give to people who are reading your writing they wont understand what your trying to saying.Thats why you need to have Clear topic to describe "good" writing.

-Why do we have to have good understaning of your topic?

     It's same as haveing clear topic. but used on your body pharegraph. whenever your writing an essay you will have to write a body pharegraph.Body pharegraph need good understanding of your topic beacuse if you dont understand your topic and you don't know what you are writing than it cant be describe as a good writing.

-Why do we have to have a good connecting words to have good writing?

    Good connecting word is really important in writing, beacuse good cnnecting word is connecter between clear topic and good understabding body pharegraph. even though if you have clear topic and good understanding body pharegraph if you cant connect them, its going to be a useless writing. Therefore i think we should have these three things to descrive good writing.